It is very well done yet not so understandable because of the lack of background. You seem to just jump from thing to thing, instead of actually zooming. It would be better if you did like first show a vast plan of the universe, in which you could zoom untill the milky way is visible. Then Orion's Arm, the Solar System, Earth, a continent (please not America... It's ALWAYS America), zoom on a country, a living been/object, it would be more interesting to zoom on a living been, since you could show the cells, then the mollecules, atoms and their Electron Cloud, zoom on the core and deep into the quarks.
If you are interested in remaking this work, then i would highly recomend you to buy "Science & Vie HORS-SERIE 'LE GRAND ZOOM de tout l'Univers'", if you speak French that is.
It's more elaborated than the first one, however:
STOP USING RADIAL GRADIENTS >:(!
They are really ugly, especially when they involve black and another color that has nothing to do with black. But it's not bad, it looks clean and nice. But it's a bit too basic IMO.
It's not bad, but may be you could make better clouds, if you want i can teach you how to make realistic ones, and it's very simple. Also this looked a bit rushed :/. Make rain less thick, and tween it. Also, there are some graphical bugs like the flower going behind and then back to where it was. Try making everything in it less rushed. It looks a bit like a child drawing :p. Also i didn't understand what the guy at the beginning said.
The play button was pretty cool however :p.
Thank you very much, i was learning as i went so it does have a lot of mistakes. I would apresiate the lessons since there isnt a single helpfull tutorial anywere. Thanks
And the guy at the begginging, ignore that its an ad =-D its from the converter i used to make it a AVI so i could ad music.
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Rated 4 / 5 stars April 2, 2012
Dude, e=mc^2? What does that have to do with gravity? Other than that the game is cool though it could have a trajectory preview.
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 23, 2010
Very well done
It is very well done yet not so understandable because of the lack of background. You seem to just jump from thing to thing, instead of actually zooming. It would be better if you did like first show a vast plan of the universe, in which you could zoom untill the milky way is visible. Then Orion's Arm, the Solar System, Earth, a continent (please not America... It's ALWAYS America), zoom on a country, a living been/object, it would be more interesting to zoom on a living been, since you could show the cells, then the mollecules, atoms and their Electron Cloud, zoom on the core and deep into the quarks.
If you are interested in remaking this work, then i would highly recomend you to buy "Science & Vie HORS-SERIE 'LE GRAND ZOOM de tout l'Univers'", if you speak French that is.
Rated 5 / 5 stars August 15, 2009
Very nice!
Althought i think the name could be "Pact with de Devil".
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 3, 2009
It's more elaborated
It's more elaborated than the first one, however:
STOP USING RADIAL GRADIENTS >:(!
They are really ugly, especially when they involve black and another color that has nothing to do with black. But it's not bad, it looks clean and nice. But it's a bit too basic IMO.
imo?and yea i get that alot
Rated 4 / 5 stars July 2, 2009
lol
Well animated :p
thankyou. this is like my third animation ever. im glad people think its ok :)
Rated 4 / 5 stars July 2, 2009
It's not bad, but it needs a faster spin
It needs a faster spin, otherwise we can't hit all the moles. And it's kinda hard to play :/. But you rendered it in 3d and it goes nice.
Rated 3 / 5 stars July 2, 2009
Not bad
It's not bad at all, especially for an fbf. It's not pro, but ok. And i bet you did this in a short amount of time too.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 2, 2009
Nice
The sprites were well animated, i bet this gave you a shitton of work?
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 2, 2009
It's not bad
It's not bad, but may be you could make better clouds, if you want i can teach you how to make realistic ones, and it's very simple. Also this looked a bit rushed :/. Make rain less thick, and tween it. Also, there are some graphical bugs like the flower going behind and then back to where it was. Try making everything in it less rushed. It looks a bit like a child drawing :p. Also i didn't understand what the guy at the beginning said.
The play button was pretty cool however :p.
Thank you very much, i was learning as i went so it does have a lot of mistakes. I would apresiate the lessons since there isnt a single helpfull tutorial anywere. Thanks
And the guy at the begginging, ignore that its an ad =-D its from the converter i used to make it a AVI so i could ad music.
Rated 4 / 5 stars July 1, 2009
Nice stealing
You stole the maps from Call of duty... But at least you made it good...